Chapter 515 The Fifth Round of Comments and Reactions (2)

During the break between commercials, some people were squatting in front of the TV anxiously waiting for the "Entertainment Intern" program to come back, but more people were caught up in heated discussions, which was as lively as a rare relaxing class break in student days.

In Qin Jue's family, there was a Qingqing like Yan Liyue who took notes throughout the whole process and listed the details worthy of careful exploration. The eloquent article attracted everyone's sighs. At the same time, such version 1.0 analysis was also submitted to the program line. The comment section of the website, some sites, Vblog and other places triggered another round of exclamation.

【thin! The music director is so attentive! 】

[Qu Nan: Are you polite (dog head)

[Good guy, I was stunned for a moment. Can this be called foreshadowing? The director and screenwriter of this group must have foreshadowed a stationery store! 】

[Off topic, I didn’t expect it to be done by Qin Jue’s fans, so serious]

[Haha, the actor himself is amazing, and so are his fans and friends! # Thumbs]

[This is too strong, and the analysis is organized and clear. The quality is really high, I admire it...]

[We don’t mean to make people angry. Let’s talk about it. It’s up to idols to live up to their own expectations, be able to perform well, and perform something good (dog head)

[Laughing, some people may be offended]

[Hey, people are so popular that they are so popular. Some people can only copy some youth pain literature with copywriting, post pictures of underworld filters, and then blow some colorful rainbow farts. I won’t say who it is]

[Suddenly I felt a little emotional, look at the ecology of this rice circle, how great it is, the actors work hard and the fans work hard too]

【do not you know? Qin Jue has his own website where his fans’ film reviews and analyzes are posted. There are also many people who gather together every day to encourage each other to study for postgraduate entrance exams. It’s a good group of kids]

[Hahahahahahaha, a passerby is here. Although I am not a fan and have not registered, I like to use tourist mode to visit Qin Jue’s place when I have time]

【Really? Then I’m going to have a look too】

This group of passers-by who were inadvertently attracted by Amway were immersed in clicking on the web page or downloading the APP. The cut-scene advertisement of "Entertainment Intern" ended, and the face of the host Lin Yuqin appeared on the screen.

"Dear public judges, viewers in front of the TV and on the Internet, welcome back!" He said with a smile, "I'm really sorry, everyone's support is so enthusiastic. Our program team has not only gained a lot more since we reached the fifth round, The audience, there are many more sponsors, and the advertising time has happily become longer.”

There was good-natured laughter from the audience.

"So, it was our Group A's work just now. Their final stop rate among the public judges was 43%, and their stop rate among the four judges and teachers was 25%. They passed the test without any danger. Congratulations to them! "

Qu Nan and others stepped forward at Lin Yuqin's signal, and the audience also applauded.

"The next step is our usual review session!" Lin Yuqin said in a measured tone, "I noticed just now that only teacher Zeng Xinhuiqin pressed the stop button. I believe everyone is curious about the reason for doing this."

Zeng Xinhuiqin raised the desktop microphone to her mouth: "Qu Nan, your performance this time is far below my expectations."

She was merciless when she spoke, and Qu Nan shrank, holding the phone and nodding.

"In fact, you are filming a TV series, not a movie."

Zeng Xinhuiqin continued, "In a TV series with dozens of episodes, there is no problem in placing the Return of the Wild Goose chapter in the first half, but this is a movie. What we watch when watching a movie is not a unit drama, but the entire story."

Qu Nan's heart twitched from time to time with her comments, and he bowed slightly again and nodded vigorously.

"The plot structure is very poor, the transitions are clever, and the ink style is relatively innovative, but in some places it becomes a little clever."

Zeng Xinhuiqin focused on the group portraits of Guiyan Susu out for fun and the fight between father and son named Li in the later period, "You are greedy for too much, and you don't know how to adjust the proportion. Are the audience here just to watch your slide show?"

"...I'm sorry, it was my mistake." Qu Nan whispered.

"Since there are so many, why not continue to streamline the parts that should be condensed? Every shot in the movie is precious. The more you waste, the less qualified you will be as a director." Zeng Xinhuiqin said.

She hit the nail on the head, just like the scene between Qin Guiyan and Su Su. Qu Nan always wanted to design a step-by-step emotional development line, but due to the length of time, the parts that should be brief were not brief, and the audience was adapted to this rhythm. They couldn't get enough of the quick transitions, and they all expressed their desire to see more detailed daily routines, but in the end they ended up in a bad situation.

"You pay too much attention to details." Zeng Xinhuiqin's eyes were sharp and her expression was serious. "Your last round of works was not bad because its story was very simple and simple. But once it involves this kind of slightly complicated background story, You can’t hold it anymore.”

"Being too obsessed with details will harm you."

Qu Nan took a deep breath and accepted the criticism.

Zeng Xinhuiqin's sharp comments were not finished yet. She turned over the recording paper at hand and asked again: "Did you delete Shen Danqing's part or was the script just like that?"

"Uh." Qu Nan opened his mouth and glanced at the screenwriters He Jiayi and Wang Kaiyue unconsciously.

"It was filmed according to the script, right?" Zeng Xinhuiqin noticed his little move at a glance, "Okay, who of the two screenwriting interns will tell me the idea of ​​​​this character design?"

He Jiayi and Wang Kaiyue looked at each other anxiously.

"This." Wang Kaiyue thought about who he was as a man, and raised his hand nervously, "Yes, that's it, because the plot we got is more...detailed. When setting the characters, the character Shen Danqing was... As the male protagonist's former love appears, I am responsible for her life, and Bian He is responsible for the love-hate relationship between her and Qin Feiyan."

Zeng Xinhuiqin nodded indifferently: "Where's your temperament?"

He Jiayi hissed: "When we designed the three female characters, we aimed for different styles. Shen Dan was a sassy and strong girl when she was a teenager. Later, her family was exterminated and she met Qin Feiyan. She was born out of misery. He has stronger tenacity, but at the same time he has more weakness and dependence because of love.”

"But due to Qin Feiyan's sudden departure, Shen Danqing fell into confusion and regret, and over time developed into resentment and resentment, and gradually became paranoid. So..."

"You're talking about settings, not people."

Zeng Xinhuiqin interrupted her.

He Jiayi was stunned for a moment.

"Where are the valiant strength of the past and the tenacity, weakness and dependence after the encounter?" Zeng Xinhuiqin asked.

"Well……"

"You want to solve it just by remembering it, right?" Zeng Xinhuiqin looked at Qu Nan again, "It's stupid to compare Su Su and Shen Danqing twenty years ago."

She showed no mercy: "How can two women with different backgrounds, different experiences, and different personalities be compared together? What do you want to embody?"

Qu Nan and others lowered their heads together.

【It's too cruel】

[Zeng Xinhuiqin’s mouth has always been so poisonous]

[Be ruthless, Director Zeng is right]

[I also think Shen Danqing’s two subsequent outbursts were good-looking, but they were too abrupt]

[Yes, why do you suddenly have to die?]

[Of course it was because she finally met Qin Feiyan, but ended up having an argument and then separated, so Shen Danqing went completely crazy? Isn’t this easy to relate to? I don’t think there’s a problem]

[No, don’t get the point wrong. What Director Zeng meant was that Shen Danqing’s “strongness” was not reflected at all]

[Shen Danqing in Memory Kill...well...seems to be an ordinary chivalrous sister]

[That’s true. . . 】

[It is precisely because it was not reflected in the front that it seems that her paranoia in the back came too quickly. 】

[In addition, many people at that time said that looking at Su Su would remind them of how sweet Qin Feiyan and Shen Danqing were back then. This is not the same thing at all. Does Qin Feiyan treat different women in the same way? Obviously not, that’s why it’s weird]

【So that's it...】

[But I think Chen Danqing has already performed. She did a really good job. Wasn't that appearance and He Yu in the back enough to express their past and Shen Danqing's mental journey? 】

[Then screenwriters and directors can’t rely on actors for everything? It all depends on the actors. What do they do for food? 】

[Listen, Director Zeng just said it]

"You want to keep it cool, but also want the characters to be full-bodied." Zeng Xinhuiqin, who was at the judges' table, said with her hands folded across her chest, "But the results are neither good nor bad. We can only rely on the actors' acting skills to make up for the missing characters and settings in the script. In the end, It’s still a work with an absolute male protagonist, it can only be said to be slightly better, but I don’t think the 80% new and second-hand goods in the junk pile are anything to be proud of.”

"..." He Jiayi nodded with red eyes.

She was actually very aggrieved, because the plot she was given was so disgusting, and it was not easy to do this.

But I gritted my teeth and thought about it. In the future, when I work as a screenwriter, I will definitely encounter more disgusting parties than I imagined. It is even possible that I will not meet outstanding actors like Qin Jue and Chen Danqing, so I try my best to Ming swallowed this discomfort.

"She just has too high expectations." Yue Yang came out to smooth things over. "I think Qu Nan has made great progress in terms of camera movement and other aspects, and it is a very significant improvement."

Zeng Xinhuiqin leaned back noncommittally, but did not refute.

Yue Yang praised a lot about the filming, especially the action scenes involving Qin Jue. Perhaps it was because Qin Jue already had a good reputation in "The Cage" before her, but the judges were not too impressed by the fact that she excelled in the drama, and they had the mentality of "full scores in the academic test are normal."

Qu Nan's mood improved, and he glanced at Qin Jue in unison with the cameraman, artist, and others, with very grateful eyes.

This kind of hard power in filming was a small trick given to him by Teacher Qin. At this time, he got Yue Yang's affirmation and suddenly felt that he was not that bad. At least there was progress and salvation.

"However, the short section between Xue Yu and Qin Feiyan at the end." Yue Yang's comment was very pertinent, "It still tasted a bit boring."

Qu Nan nodded sympathetically.

The romantic style is really not his specialty.

"This again involves the issue of plot structure and resource allocation." Yue Yang said earnestly, "If you think about it, first streamline the plot and save the number of scenes, then less money will be spent on wires and special effects. Use these funds to rent Aren’t the directors and camera assistants who are good at this style provided by the program team good?”

Qu Nan was in a daze after hearing this.

Damn it, right? !

"Ah, I didn't, didn't expect..." His face was full of regret and annoyance.

"Look. Experience, experience, young man." Yue Yang looked experienced.

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